Tanaga by 2 (incomplete)

​If love or lust, you did ask

I would jump up & down to say

That love is where my mind lay,

Not heart, body, I could mask.

But you split minds like devil,

Gave two heaven, which to miss,

I treasure the days of bliss,

To make a choice, void of will.


Written in response to jilly’s July challenge. The poem is half done. So anyone who read is welcome to complete it. It’s a Tanaga which means seven syllables for each line with rhyme scheme abba cddc. You can complete it as a Tanaga or some other form which suits this.

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