I dropped a coin at the corner,
to the homeless man.
Swung and walked straight,
On the air,
holding the street lamp.
Caught a balloon,
For the crying kid!
Bought a hot dog,
For vendor’s smile!
She walks, straight,
Her legs, Not her hip!
She didn’t take a look!
Not even a peek!
Does she know I exist?
I might have to go to the moon!
Then came that wind!
That wind!!!
Lifting her skirt,
Shifting my thoughts,
Fixing my eyes,
Where gentlemen don’t look!
She turn and frown!
In her mind,
I forever look,
A mugshot!
For stealing her gaze,
At last!
Photo credit: New South Wales Police Department, 1920
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Written in response to dVerse’s mugging for the Camera. Lilian gave us today an amazing and fun task of writing poems with – a collection of vintage mug shots from the 1920s taken by the New South Wales Police Department, As prompt for the poem. Check the post for more details. Click here to submit your poems or read some.
Part of my #The100DaysOfPoetryLearning project. You can read all of my poems here.
Ahh love your imagination here! I would not have expected that story behind his face 🙂
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It was a shocker to me too, just randomly popped out in my mind and I am glad it did!
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I can see all of this unfolding. Such beautiful imagery!
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Thank you!
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A nice, heartfelt story you’ve out of that gaze. Seems he did really deserve that.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! Yes he did I suppose!
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You made me feel for the poor man. But I guess he will be charged- his looks betray him
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I like to think that he is charged to be looked like that by her for his life. Seems too deserving for him I suppose! Thank you for reading!
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I am glad you described him in a positive way, seeing beyond the facial expression.
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Oh thank you! It’s the first thing which occurred to me when I saw him! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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You’ve written a great story for this dastardly looking fellow! Great fun.
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Thank you! I thought he deserved a good story for that deep look of his! 😀
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I’m glad you found a compassionate story for this sour face. Well done!
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Thank you! Your kind words bring much happiness!
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I’m pleased to spread a little sunshine 🙂
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Yeah, I agree with the comments above… right there on the street, in his head… in his words. His ghosts hang in your words.
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Oh thank you so much Charlie, today is like my best day, I’m glad I could connect with all these people and let them see my mind and thoughts!
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You will have even better days! Keep writing… keep playing with words. Ask questions freely. And above all, shake off any negativity anyone tries to hand you.
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Thank you for your kind advice! I’ll try to do so. Once again thank you!
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I love the ending. 🙂
Adorable.
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Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m glad you loved it!
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Ah! So that’s why his gaze is so intense. It all makes sense now. 🙂 I like your story, you managed to humanize this rough character.
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Oh I’m glad I could do that. It’s just his gaze had a meaning which I felt is this! Thank you for reading!
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Oh my…..I am right on this street, walking with you and seeing and hearing and watching all of this! You’ve really put the reader in the scene. Well done! Mr Munroe…..I wonder who he really was????
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Oh those words just makes me happy! I’m glad you could see it. I cannot ask for more. Thank you again for such a great prompt, those pictures were amazing!
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Glad you enjoyed. I found the photos fascinating.
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Me too! They were like a peek in to a different world, one which is beatiful and rough!
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oh wow. the action. how your words are so alive i can see this scene happening. so well done!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you could see it, the scene just clicked the moment I saw that pic!
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oooh. nice nice!
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